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Vally and Tye

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"Mine will be here next week." Lizzy said watching her bring he large box inside. "Ok cool." Hailey said, her voice cracking from excitement. She pulled the box inside the apartment and ran over to the counter. She whipped out a short knife and cut the top of the box open slowly and carefully. She opened the flaps to see her fursona's head staring up at her. She cried out in delight and pulled it out of the box. "Oh man I love it! The maker is amazing!" She said pulling the bodysuit out. The head was a red raptor head with 3/4 of the bottom jaw grey. The eyes orange. The body suit was red except for the belly and and some 'slash' markings on the arms. (Two things here guys. First this isn't a traditional fursuit, this one is all one piece.)(2nd. If you want a picture of what it looks like take a look at my PP it has the head. As some of you know I'm terrible at drawing so that means 1. I can't do a full image and 2. The head isn't that great. But still it gives a bit of an image. Also the belly of the suit is like that of a seahorse or the Pokémon dragonite) She looked over the suit and smiled. "Be right back!" She said yelled picking all of it up and running into her room. "No way she is able to put that on herself first try." Lizzy said grinning. Hailey stripped down removing her panties and bra as well. She unzipped the back of the suit slowly before stepping into the suit. She pulled the suit up to her waist and felt how formfitting and tight it was. It was warm and comforting on her body. Then she pulled it up a bit further. She reached back trying to pull the zipper up. After struggling for 15 minutes she gave up and knocked on the door. "Liz can you give me a hand with the zipper please." She called. "Knew it." Lizzy whispered and walked over to the door. She came in and Hailey turned around she also pushed her arms down the arm holes, Lizzy helping her get her fingers into the 3 digits. Then Hailey pulled the head over hers. Lizzy smiled at her and pulled the zipper up. There was a quiet crack as the zipper broke free of the zipper line seam. Lizzy cursed in her head. -Oh god-  "There was a note and a badge as well." Lizzy said tossing them onto her bed as she left. "Ok thanks." She said walking around in the suit for a few minutes. She brushed her suit smoothly and felt the nice tight feeling. It was starting to get a bit warm though, she thought. She then sat down on the bed, her tail off to the side and picked up the note. She unfolded it and read it. -Thank you Hailey for commissioning your suit with us and we are happy to tell you we had a blast creating it for you. We hope you love Valor as much as we do and wanted to thank you for coming to us for your suit. We've never done a raptor before! Have fun! Sincerely Unclever Fursuit Maker name xD. She smiled and stood up picking up the badge. It was a simple chain with Valor's head on it and her name below it. She slipped it around her neck and left the room. "Oh and uhh Hailey." Lizzy said as she entered. "Yes?" She replied spinning in a circle, the tail whipping around too. "Uhh..." she paused. "Umm. When I zipped it up. The zipper kind of broke off..." she said looking down. Instantly Hailey's 3 digits flew to the back of the suit finding the zipper piece indeed gone. "No! What am I going to do, I have school in two days." She said sitting down on the couch. "Just go with it on." Lizzy told her sitting down next to her, embarrassed. "Are you crazy everyone will laugh at me. Normal people don't see us as... equals." She said. "So what, I'll be with you. It's alright Hailey, you'll be fine." Lizzy said giving her a pat on the back. "Fine! But if it goes poorly the first day..." she trailed off. "However I did have an idea." Lizzy said walking into Hailey's room. She emerged carrying a grey tank top bra. The pulled it over the raptor's head and pulled it down onto her. It fit tightly but looked quite sexy. The straps were about half an inch thick and the "bra" part of the tank top covered the bottom majority of her breasts bulging on the suit but not all. The tops of the fur on her chest were exposed giving it an even hotter look. Then Lizzy pulled some grey panties up the raptors legs soon followed by some grey shorts. "Perfect! Now you'll fit right in." Lizzy said standing up. Looking at her. "Come on Vally lets go for your first outing. (for story purposes Vally sounds more female name for Hailey when she is in suit rather than Valor.) Inside the suit Hailey smiled. She followed Lizzy out the door and into the hallway. "I'm not going outside though." She said firmly. "Fair enough." Lizzy responded. -Later that night.- they had encountered a couple of people around the building, some who got pictures with Vally and some who threw her disgusted looks. She flopped on her bed as she returned. Sweating, she painted from the heat. Lizzy poked a few hand held fans through the mouth of the suit and put them inside as she lay there. She also got a quick dinner before falling asleep.
Kind of felt in the furry mood this weekend and have been writing stories a lot lately, decided to write this one. There are a lot of stories that never come to DeviantArt, but if I get enough support I'll show you guys some snippets and you can decide if I should continue. OTHERWISE please give my your feedback on this story, as I would like to continue it.... If you guys want me to.
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Would be awesome if you continued this :-) Her going to school stuck in the suit would be sweet.